Bathoroom

Grapix · 03-23-2009, 09:11 AM

Here is one of very few arch works i did, all modeled using silo2
rendered in mental ray

slowpid · 03-23-2009, 09:16 AM

Wow, thats impressive.

TheBat · 03-23-2009, 09:28 AM

Wow, nice work. Good textures and nice lighting!

Keep up the good work and thanks for posting!

Cheers TheBat

lovisx · 03-23-2009, 01:46 PM

great work!

mseydel · 03-23-2009, 03:03 PM

Great detail and excellent modeling! Thanks for showing this; I especially like the sink/faucets and the showere. One thing that stikes me as odd is that throw rug- I get the idea, as it draws your eye into the room, but then you look at it closely and it doesn't look/feel like a rug. The entire image may be stronger if the rug were out of the scene; unless that was the client's logo, of course.

Another very minor crit is that the shower base seems to have a buckle in the bottom left, then a slight gap with the wall.

BTW; what app did you use for the rendering?

dasch · 03-23-2009, 03:28 PM

I agree with the other comments. Very nice work. Even a slight bump map might help with the rug.
Excellent !

RogerKnightly · 03-25-2009, 05:36 PM

very nice, love the little touch of chromatic aberration. The textures light and modelling are also very very nice.

If I was to crit I'd say close of the ceiling, I know it makes the GI/FG solution a pain in the ass but it looks odd having a textureless white void for a roof. The cabinet above the loo made me wonder for a second why you'd have a flatscreen tv in the toilet

that may just be me though. On a final and really picky note the floor and walls lack contrast, a slightly uneven bump and a little more reflectivity might help that.

Converse to what mseydel says i actually like the shadows by the base of the shower unit. they really set it in place.

LoveFest · 03-26-2009, 06:21 PM

Beautiful job. The render really compliments the 3D work.

03-23-2009, 09:11 AM	#1
Grapix Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 62	Bathoroom Here is one of very few arch works i did, all modeled using silo2 rendered in mental ray

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lovisx boing Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Toronto, Ontario Posts: 1,669	great work! __________________ cgkitty hp pavilion tablet pc. 1.9 dual core 3 gigs ram ati hd 3200 graphics card.

03-23-2009, 03:28 PM	#6
dasch 3D-ish Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: British Columbia Posts: 1,416	I agree with the other comments. Very nice work. Even a slight bump map might help with the rug. Excellent ! __________________ dasch DaschStudio.com Dasch's StrataCafe Gallery Dasch's VectorArt3D Models

03-25-2009, 05:36 PM	#7
RogerKnightly scallywag Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Cork, Ireland Posts: 2,171	very nice, love the little touch of chromatic aberration. The textures light and modelling are also very very nice. If I was to crit I'd say close of the ceiling, I know it makes the GI/FG solution a pain in the ass but it looks odd having a textureless white void for a roof. The cabinet above the loo made me wonder for a second why you'd have a flatscreen tv in the toilet that may just be me though. On a final and really picky note the floor and walls lack contrast, a slightly uneven bump and a little more reflectivity might help that. Converse to what mseydel says i actually like the shadows by the base of the shower unit. they really set it in place. __________________ Xeon Quad 2.5ghz 3GB Ram Quadro FX 570 XP Pro Wacom Intuos coffee.. lots of coffee

03-26-2009, 06:21 PM	#8
LoveFest Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: USA Posts: 450	Beautiful job. The render really compliments the 3D work. __________________ W.I.P: Knight's Armor Latest Unreal Map Home Page: http://utlovefest.planetunreal.gamespy.com/

03-23-2009, 09:16 AM	#2
slowpid Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 71	Wow, thats impressive.

03-23-2009, 09:28 AM	#3
TheBat Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 118	Wow, nice work. Good textures and nice lighting! Keep up the good work and thanks for posting! Cheers TheBat

03-23-2009, 03:03 PM	#5
mseydel Matt_Connors on Twitter Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: New York, NY Posts: 253	Great detail and excellent modeling! Thanks for showing this; I especially like the sink/faucets and the showere. One thing that stikes me as odd is that throw rug- I get the idea, as it draws your eye into the room, but then you look at it closely and it doesn't look/feel like a rug. The entire image may be stronger if the rug were out of the scene; unless that was the client's logo, of course. Another very minor crit is that the shower base seems to have a buckle in the bottom left, then a slight gap with the wall. BTW; what app did you use for the rendering?